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If a flame is so strong,
      Why does it flicker?
If water is so delicate,
      Why is it feared?
If air is so important,
      Why is it polluted?
If the ground is so nurturing,
      Why is it covered?
If everyone is equal,
      Why is there war?
If we have two eyes,
      Why can't we see?
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All rhetorical questions.
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I like how thought-provoking this is. Lovely work. And the structure is also appropriate and therefore effective.
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~SirRantsALot Feb 27, 2013  Student Photographer
^-^ Thanks!
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~hywrathboi Feb 20, 2013  Student General Artist
That last line really hit home--nicely done. :)
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~SirRantsALot Feb 20, 2013  Student Photographer
Thank you, and that you for the favorite! :D
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~hywrathboi Feb 27, 2013  Student General Artist
Of course!
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~AikonikBoy Feb 10, 2013  Hobbyist Photographer
This is beautiful.... Seriously beautiful.
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~SirRantsALot Feb 10, 2013  Student Photographer
Thank you, very very much <3
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~Dozza88pwns Feb 9, 2013  Student Writer
AHHHH, I must say I love rhetoric in poetry. Just poking holes in the collective human identity. Well done you.
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~SirRantsALot Feb 9, 2013  Student Photographer
Thank you so much! It means a lot <3 :D (and thank you super much for the watch and favorites!)
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